09 October 2008

California students can't write

This is a quote from a student of mine:

"In this sound design I will use a DJ remix compilation of Bob Marley’s “Stir It Up,” “Jamaican Rum” and “Jammin” to depict the figure’s sense of youth, freedom and illustrate the beach lifestyle attitude using it as the theme to demonstrate its aspects of the no worries, laid backness, and free spirit mood, attitude and perspective."

I have great fondness for this student, but really, look at this sentence! OMG!

2 comments:

Monty said...

When I was at SFSU, this article ran in the Oakland Tribune about how unprepared incoming freshmen in the CSU system were.

Denise said...

I had to go back and read it again when you said it was one sentence.

Wow. Just... wow.